In the middle of the quite lake, it was a lot of activities in the wood boat. Inside the boat were a grandpa, grandson, and a grandfather’s dog, there were coloring with yellow, for the day was starting to get dark. The white and brown dog was in front of the grandfather; it was drinking the yellow water and thinking that the water was honey. Meanwhile, the old man was between the kid and the dog, he was fishing, smoking, teaching fish to his granson, and thinking if the dog was going to frighten away the fish. He was wore a leather hat, a beige shirt, and blue jeans. Also the men’s shirt and pants seemed green below the yellow light. The child was behind his grandfather, and he was looking him trying to learn, but he was forgetting to paddle. Therefore, the boat stayed on the middle of the lake with severals activities inside it.
from Linda Wesley:
ReplyDeleteI love your details, especially this...
"...it was drinking the yellow water and thinking that the water was honey."
P.S. I also love the background on your blog!
Very nice description paragraph, I like your topic sentence, and your way in thinking.
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I love your description. It has a many details
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Nice paragraph, have many details.
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good job Loren keep going
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